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I like it! One thing... Wouldn't she be all dead and rotten if it was around Christmas and she said November 19? So do you mean December 19???

I like it, it's very strong. You express you emotions well. :D

It's interesting. It's kind of random though, a little hard to understand. For some reason, I liked the paper coffins line. :D

WOW! This was excellent, one of the best I have read on here so far :D I think you might want to change "distractor" to "distraction".

Are you tired?

Coolie. You may want to reconsider There once was a princess named Besses, Who had the most glorious tresses. Because the second line is off a little and they don't ...

I don't really know anyone because i'm new... But so far... Jennafina... and... Snoink... Because I had an awesome convo with her once...

WHY ARE WE TALKING HERE ALL CALMLY WHEN THE FIRE FROM LIKE 10 MONTHS AGO NEVER GOT PUT OUT!!! :o:o:o

So much energy With nowhere to go I don't know how To let it flow Let it leave Let it out I feel that things Are just about To blow, ...

Then I can re-spin my past Like a spider that's a victim Rebuilding his broken home Old troubles not afflicting And then when I'm ready I'll start life all over ...

I like it, but there is no rhythm! You don't have to make it like EXACTLY the same, just a little more... Together.

I don't know, i'd have to think about that one. What color are zebras? (I stole one...)

Are you INSANE???

I drempt this one guy decided to kill me, and he was about to, only I woke up. And then I went back to sleep. :p

Cement (Lifting cement blocks)